tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6878743574323878254.post1532168787019449338..comments2018-02-22T19:29:59.093+13:00Comments on Machelle: Hooking InPES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6878743574323878254.post-22746250845605680712015-08-27T11:37:17.401+12:002015-08-27T11:37:17.401+12:00You have tried different ways of hooking your audi...You have tried different ways of hooking your audience in. I wonder if your question sentence in paragraph 2 is in the right place. it might make more sense before the sentence where you tell us what your group is making to sell.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04944050789204527699noreply@blogger.com