WALT Write introductions that orientate and hook in the audience:
For the past few weeks, Team 4 has been learning about Trade and Enterprise. Trade and Enterprise is like you are selling something and also you are Enterprising. There are six groups and the names are, musical Instrument, Toys, Homeware, Jewellers, Kitchen. Team 4 have these PT’s and Pieces. There are four of then, but they are different.
For the past few weeks, Team 4 has been learning about Trade and Enterprise. There are six groups and the names are, Music Instrument, Toys, Homeware, Jewellers, Kitchen. The group I am in is Music Instrument. Hey, do you know what we are selling?
For the past few weeks, Team 4 has been learning about Trade and Enterprise. There are six groups and here are some of it. musical Instrument, Toys, Homeware, Jewellers . Hey, do you know what we are selling? We are selling drum. DRUMS DRUMS!!! COME AND GET YOU DRUMS!!!
You have tried different ways of hooking your audience in. I wonder if your question sentence in paragraph 2 is in the right place. it might make more sense before the sentence where you tell us what your group is making to sell.
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