The Sinking Boat

One sunny morning my family and I were getting ready to go out in our boat. When we got there my mum and I were getting everything ready to have our picnic. When everything was ready my brothers and I all ran and we ate and eat and eat until we were full. After that it started to rain. After I had had a swim in the calm water I got out and I started to cry because a thunder storm was about to start. Then we all got in the boat and the water was cold and the boat was sinking. We all said, “Help help!! It was so so scary for our family.