Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
Hey have you ever been to Omaru Creek? Well I have. Last week the year six and five students waked there on Thursday, but it was not only our school there were college kids and other schools. When we got to Omaru Creek we were watching this man with a chain on his right leg and there were two rubbish bags too, and why we went there is to learned about our community The part that I like was when the man with the ribbons was doing the pukana. After that the best part that I loved was when the lady was dancing and we watched people doing the cook island drums and then we went to a man telling us he has a beautiful daughter and he’s a surfer and that he like’s catches big fish.