Thursday, 12 October 2017

My family trip

This morning my cousin, aunty, my mum and I are already on the road going to Palmerston North. We are heading down for a wedding. My brother and my other cousins will be coming tomorrow with the drummers, "Why the drummers?" Well we are performing for the wedding. We wont be coming back till Monday, but its going to be fun.

1 comment:

  1. This was a very nice piece of writing. I think that your punctuation was lovely. The only thing I noticed was that I wish you would have left us hanging a bit and put a eclipse at the end and then you could of done another piece of writing on Monday or Tuesday about the wedding. I hope you consider this. I also have gone a long way for a wedding. In fact, I went to the opposite side of the Earth! We went to England for my Aunt's wedding. Anyway, will you write one telling us about the wedding?